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THE RULE OF THREE: Using the magic number to plot by Julie Miller
(This is an abridged version of a workshop I presented at the Romantic
Times convention in Kansas City, Missouri, and again as a guest
presenter on eHarlequin.com. While the focus of the
original workshop was on plotting romantic suspense, I've altered it a
bit to apply to all genres of romance fiction.)
In my experience as the author of 25 books--including award winners and
bestsellers--I'm often asked: How do you know you have everything you
need in your novels to tell a complete, satisfying
story?
The key is in plotting. While books will differ in terms of voice,
storyline, level of descriptive detail, etc.--there are some elements
that every romance novel should contain. An interesting meet. Emotion.
Internal/external conflicts. Sensual encounters. Rising tension. Black
moment. Satisfying resolution. Etc.
That's a lot to work into one story, and to have all those elements
intertwine smoothly. Putting such a story together can be overwhelming,
especially for a less-experienced writer or one who is new to the genre.
While my system isn't the only way to plot a novel, the Rule of 3 is a
tangible way to plot a story before getting started, or to help during
the editing process. It's also a checklist that can prove
useful to writers who've hit a road block in a work in progress.
If you understand the magic of the number 3 in stories, then you
understand the basics of plotting--including introducing and escalating
the conflict, developing characters, and delivering a satisfying
resolution to the conflict.
Think of stories you know where the number 3 figures prominently--you
know, Bears, Pigs, Wishes, and so on. For this article, I'll concentrate
on the children's classic, "The Three Little
Pigs." If you analyze the story, you can see the theme of the number 3
is repeated in several ways. 3 protagonists (pigs). 3 settings (houses).
3 dangerous encounters (with the Big Bad Wolf).
Note the variety of the characters, even in this simple story--3
enterprising pigs, with different ideas, different work ethics, and
varying degrees of intelligence. The pigs have an internal
conflict--they each need a home, they each want to be safe. They have an
external conflict (someone furry wants them for dinner). They each
respond to danger in a different way (1. run, 2. run, 3. build a fire,
boil some water, and trick the wolf into coming down the chimney).
Though I generally talk about suspects/red herrings and romantic
suspense at this point, you can apply the Rule of 3
characters to plotting any romance story. How about 3 meetings between
the hero and heroine? The first encounter, they can walk away from. The
second encounter is a little more intense, but the third time, there are
some serious thought processes and emotional reactions going on.
Following that basic structure, you've already plotted 3 scenes that
build the
sensual tension, emotional development, and characterization of the
story.
Now look at the 3 settings in the children's story--straw, twigs, and
bricks. Obviously, you don't have to be that literal in your story, but
picking out 3 different settings for a scene to occur in your story
automatically gives you 3 scenes of your plot. It can be 3 different
countries, 3 locations within the same city, 3 rooms within the same
house. And remember how each setting in the Pigs' story intensifies.
That can apply to building the conflict in your story, too. How about a
first meet in an open place, like a park or Italian piazza or on the
open road? The second setting becomes more intimate--inside the house,
inside the castle, inside the car--forcing your characters together. The
third meeting can be where a turning point of your story takes place--a
love scene in the bedroom, overhearing that secret from behind the
hidden panel near the throne, the police barrier
the hero crashes that car through to rescue the woman he loves. Again,
thinking in 3's gives you not just ideas for scenes in your book, but a
logical way to organize them so that the conflict intensifies and sexual
and emotional tension build.
Finally, let's look at 3 encounters. A full-length romance novel will
have more scenes than a children's story like "The Three Little Pigs",
but I think you'll follow the basic plotting idea. That first encounter
is where the hero and heroine meet. The reader, like the characters on
the page, gets to know who those main characters are.
You might reveal tangible details, like name, looks, job; but you'll
also give the reader the first glimpse inside one or both characters--a
goal, a fear, personality traits, etc. At the second meeting--farther
along in your story--the reader has some idea of what the external
conflict
is that's facing your characters--the pigs face the Big Bad Wolf and
faulty architecture; they have nowhere to run except to each other.
In a romance, at that second encounter, you should reveal something more
to the reader, just as the characters reveal something more to each
other. It can be literal, as in a love scene. It can be a
confession of a secret. It can be the revelation of a shared
orconflicting goal. It can be the discovery of a deep, unplanned
emotion. By this second encounter, too, the reader needs to see those
two main characters turning to each other--the hero and heroine might
not trust each other
yet, but circumstances need to throw them together for an external
reason. The third encounter needs to be the turning point of your story.
In "The Three Little Pigs", the third pig steps up and shows his mettle,
protecting his home and his family, and conquering the threat that
pursues them.
In the denouement of the story, lessons are learned about building
something solid, knowing who to count on, working hard and being smart.
In a romance novel, that third encounter needs to be
where the hero and heroine step up to admit their feelings (to
themselves, usually--confessing love to each other is generally part of
the denouement), and to put something on the line (their lives, their
hearts, their goals) to confront the threat pursuing them. Again, in a
romantic suspense, that threat can be the villain, but every romance has
a threat to the main characters' happily-ever-after--a fear that has to
be overcome or a third party trying to break them up, for example.
As I stated earlier, the length of this article doesn't allow me to
share handouts or go into more detail, but I hope you get the picture.
The Rule of 3 is magic. When you're plotting your own
tales of love and conflict and happily-ever-afters, remember "The Three
Little Pigs" and other tales with 3 repeating elements.
By brainstorming before you write, you can come up with 3 scenes for the
main characters to interact, 3 places for that interaction to occur, and
3 gradually escalating events that will build your story to a dramatic
turning point. Obviously, 3 scenes aren't enough to make a complete
romance novel, but by plotting those 3 scenes, and remembering to build
the danger/ risk/ threat/ action/ emotion/ intensity in each scene, you
will see the overall structure of your story. And,
hopefully, it will be as easy as 1-2-3 to fill in the spaces in between
and plot your romance
novel.
*Julie Miller is the award-winning author of more than 25 books for
Harlequin and Dorchester. Her current release is a sizzling contemporary
military romance from Harlequin Blaze--BASIC TRAINING, winner of a 4 1/2
review from Romantic Times BookClub. You can meet Ms. Miller at the RT
convention in Daytona, Florida this May--or through her website at
www.juliemiller.org
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So You Want to Publish a Book
by Julie Miller
This begins a series of articles for Notes From the Prairie about a
question I'm asked time and again when I do workshops, book signings,
school programs, interviews--and that I receive in fan letters and
e-mails. How do you get published?
Well, unfortunately, there is no magic formula. If there was, I'd bottle
it, sell it, get rich and buy my
own mountain to build a secluded (yet electronically well-equipped!)
cabin on.
But there are a few things I've learned along my journey to selling that
first book, and the continuing
education I'm receiving as I've gone on to sell 27 more books after
that. I'm starting with a basic list
today--it's easy to copy and post beside your computer--I'm all for
easy, visual motivation to keep
me writing. In subsequent articles, I'll go into some detail about
various items on the list.
Basically, these are the things that have helped me build and maintain a
career in writing. By no
means is it an easy journey--it has been filled with some super highs
and some lows that can suck the joy right out of a gal. But it has
always been an exciting journey, and a rewarding one. Other authors
might take a different path to publication, but I'll bet we share a lot
of the same secrets.
These are some of the lessons I've learned through hard knocks, and from
generous mentors and savvy publishing professionals. Julie Miller's TOP
TEN LIST to becoming a published
romance writer.
1. Work your keister off
2. Read, Read, Read
3. Learn the business
4. Sit your behind in the chair and write
5. Prioritize your time (esp. if you have another
job)
6. Keep expanding your knowledge
7. Learn grammar basics
8. Story first
9. Know your characters inside and out
10. Love what you write
*Julie Miller is the author of MAJOR ATTRACTION a September 2004 release
and a RT Nominee for Best Harlequin Blaze of 2004! Find out more about
Julie Miller at www.juliemiller.org and look for her new releases: THE
PRECINCT: PARTNER-PROTECTOR--Harlequin Intrigue--Jan. 2005, THE
PRECINCT: POLICE BUSINESS--Harlequin Intrigue--April 2005,THE PRECINCT:
BRAVO-TANGO-www.eHarlequin.com online read which starts March 28th.
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Julie Miller's TOP TEN LIST to
becoming a published romance writer
1. Work your keister off
2. Read, Read, Read
3. Learn the business
4. Sit your behind in the chair and write
5. Prioritize your time (esp. if you have another job)
6. Keep expanding your knowledge
7. Learn grammar basics
8. Story first
9. Know your characters inside and out
10. Love what you write
Article #2: It's Not Just an Adventure--It's a Job
Last month I offered a general introduction about what I've found it
takes to become a published author. This month I'm going to start
discussing items on my how-to list in more detail.
First of all, you'll note on my list that it says nothing about coming
up with a great idea. I'm going with the assumption that if you want to
become a published author, you already have an idea or two stewing
around in your brain. If you want to become a published author so you
can get filthy rich, then, "Warning, warning, Will Robinson!" it's not
going to happen for most of us. True, there are some authors out there
who are fabulously wealthy because of their books. But the majority of
published authors find that their writing brings them extra income, or
allows them to support themselves as well as another profession might.
Do you want to be a published author? Or do you want to be rich? (Hey,
go ahead and aspire to both, but I'm only claiming to know something
about the first goal <g>)
These articles aren't for those people out there who say they've got a
great idea and wish they knew how to write it down--or wish Nora Roberts
would write it for them and split the profits <g>. It's become a cliché
in the publishing world about those aspiring authors who have great
ideas but who will never write a complete book, much less get it
published. I'm talking to you writers out there who have those ideas,
who are courageous enough to actually write them in a complete
manuscript (a must for a first sale!), but who are looking toward the
next step--publication.
Rules #1, #4, #5.
You have to treat your writing as a job--not a chore!! -- especially if
you're on the aspiring to be
published side of things. Even if it can only be a part-time job for you
because of family/other job/real life demands, you must have that job
mindset when it comes to your writing. That professional mindset will
help you produce more pages and better quality pages. That professional
voice will come across in your queries, correspondence and networking
with editors,
agents and other writers. Plus, it will help others outside of the
writing world (family, friends, etc.)
treat you more professionally. Those outsiders will learn to accept,
even respect, your creative needs and time demands if you believe your
writing is a job.
For example--pardon the double negative--you wouldn't NOT show up for
work if you were a teacher, nurse, attorney, CPA, cop, fast-food clerk,
mom, etc. If an emergency came up, your boss would let you swap and work
another shift, or she'd expect you to make up the lost work later or on
your own time. If you want to be published, you must treat your writing
time with the same responsibility and dedication. Set a regular time to
write--before or after work, on weekends, over lunch, when the kids are
at school or daycare, whatever--and stick to it. Tell others that you
are busy during those set times; say no to non-pressing activities that
would take you away from that time. If something important does come
up--a child's concert, you're sick, you need to put in overtime at your
other job--fine. Life happens to me, too. But you must then make up that
missed writing time--turn off the TV another night and go write, skip
your quilting class, do the dishes later. You still need to do that
writing because it's your job.
You must finish that manuscript. You must revise it so it's the best it
can be. You need to write regularly to improve your craft. You need to
send out queries, read articles, brainstorm, write synopses, etc. To do
all that, you must have your butt in the chair behind your computer, or
be on the porch with your laptop, or at your desk with a notepad or
typewriter. And you must do it regularly so you don't lose skills or
ideas, and you don't get behind in your goals. You can't say you'll
write tomorrow or next week or whenever because you don't feel like it,
or something comes up. This is your job. So either get in the chair, or
plan when you will make up that missed time. It's hard to be
self-motivated, but I believe it's the first key step in going from
someone who wants to write a book to an author who gets published.
I don't know a single published author who doesn't treat their writing
like a job. They are
professionals. They work their butts off. They have regular schedules,
whether it is their only job or
not. They still have families, hobbies, lives--but they write when they
plan to write, or they make it up at another time. They respect their
need to create and their desire to publish and continue to be
published.
Be a professional. Don't expect it to be easy. Work hard. Respect your
ideas and goals. Expect
others to respect your ideas and goals. Plan your writing time and stick
to it.
Believe me, being a published author is a wonderful adventure, but it's
a job first.
*Julie Miller is the author of 25 books. She's appeared on the
Waldenbooks Bestseller list, won a National Readers' Choice Award and is
a Romantic Times finalist for Best Harlequin Blaze of 2004. Her next
book, THE PRECINCT: POLICE BUSINESS, will be out in April 2005 from
Harlequin Intrigue.
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Julie Miller's TOP TEN LIST to
becoming a published romance writer
1. Work your keister off
2. Read, Read, Read
3. Learn the business
4. Sit your behind in the chair and write
5. Prioritize your time (esp. if you have another job)
6. Keep expanding your knowledge
7. Learn grammar basics
8. Story first
9. Know your characters inside and out
10. Love what you write
Article #3: Know the Basics
This month, I'm going to talk about the boring stuff. Those
less-glamorous, less fun, often confusing, fiercely debated--and
absolutely necessary elements of getting published.
In a recent interview, my editor said that one of the things she liked
best about working with me as an author was that I turn in "clean
manuscripts". What that means is that my stories don't require a lot of
editing--either in format or content. Now I'm not bragging here--it just
means that I've done my homework. It's common sense that when an
author--aspiring or published--submits a query, partial or complete
manuscript for consideration, that it be as free of errors as possible.
Editors are extremely busy people who put in long hours--they love when
an easy read crosses their desks.
By doing my homework, I'm referring primarily to two things. One, I know
my grammar and
formatting basics, and two, I know what the line/publisher is looking
for.
Almost every editor I've talked to says that they look for the story
first. Does the author have a
compelling story to tell? Are there characters the reader can care about
and invest herself in? Is
the conflict deep enough to carry an entire novel? Does the story flow
naturally? Is the pacing accurate for each scene and from scene to
scene? Does the author have a unique voice? Generally, an editor can
tell the answers to these questions by the end of the first chapter--if
not sooner.
But those same editors also say that they have to "get to" the story
first. Not "getting" a story means that there are so many errors in
grammar or mechanics or format that they can't follow the manuscript
easily enough to clearly evaluate the conflict or the characterizations
or the plot. A grammar mistake is a pacing killer. It takes the reader
out of the story. One or two mistakes can be forgiven--but too many more
than that and an editor quickly sees that editing this particular
manuscript will be a chore--and surely they have something else in the
slush pile they will like
equally well that won't be as much work. Okay, so I have a slight
advantage in this department--I was a grammar/writing teacher for 15
years. But if you passed middle school English, chances are you've
learned everything you need to know to present a manuscript that meets
industry standards. If English wasn't your thing, or you've forgotten
the details over the years, then sign up for a community college
refresher course. Or make friends with an English teacher to critique
your manuscripts. And one of the best references you can keep near your
computer is a basic grammar book--7th, 8th, or 9th grade are the best
ones to use as a resource. Schools order new editions of textbooks every
5 years, give or take, depending on budgets and curriculum changes.
Generally, they throw the old books away or sell them. Ask an English
teacher or school if you could have one of those old grammar books.
Especially if you tell them you're a writer, most schools would be happy
to share.
Editors really aren't as fussy about formatting as most authors are,
either. Get the basics right.
White paper. Legible font and print. Double-spaced. Clearly marked name
and page number. Basically, make it easy on their eyes so that something
weird like a yellow background or metallic gel ink or single-spaced
pages (yes, editors have revealed that they've received such
submissions!) make it hard to get to the story. Getting published is a
competitive enough challenge--don't give an editor any excuse
(especially one so fixable) to set aside your story and move on to the
next one.
And finally, send the right type of story to the editor. That means know
the guidelines. Even when a publisher says there aren't any guidelines,
there are. A few at any rate--novel length and subject matter are two
basics that every line and house have. Don't send a single title-length
manuscript to a series editor, for example. Be in the ballpark,
lengthwise. They won't count every word, or even every page. But there's
an obvious difference between 120,000 words and 75,000 words. The
difference between 80,000 words and 75,000 words is workable if the
story is there. Know the subtleties between a publisher's various
lines--the best way to do that is to read several books in each line.
While there are obvious differences between a Silhouette Desire and a
Steeple Hill Love Inspired, there are also less obvious differences
between a Harlequin Intrigue and a Silhouette Intimate Moments. Don't
send your story to the wrong line, or you already have one strike
against you. Flooding the market with submissions of your story won't
help you get published faster. Just as each author creates a unique
story, each line is looking for a unique type
of book.
The story that you write is something precious. Just as when raising a
child and sending him off into the world, make sure that story is as
well-prepared as can be. Dress it right. Teach it to speak correctly.
Give it every advantage possible so that it can succeed.
Don't let the boring stuff get in the way of selling your story.
Sidebar:
Grammar tips are a whole other column, but here are three general rules
writers often ask me about:
1. It's better to err on the side of too few commas rather than too many
if you're not sure what
you're doing.
2. Every sentence needs a subject and a verb (unless you are
intentionally breaking a rule--such as
using a sentence fragment to create realistic dialogue, or to speed up
pacing)3. Lay is an active verb--movement of an object (it could be
replaced with 'put' or 'set')--lay, laid,
have laid, is laying. Lie is a restive verb--a sedentary state (it could
be replaced with 'rest' or 'recline')--lie, lay, have lain, is lying.
The trick, of course, is that the past tense of 'lie' is 'lay'--if usage
of these verbs worries you, use a synonym.
*Julie Miller is an award-winning, best selling author, whose 2004
Intrigue, UNSANCTIONED MEMORIES, is a finalist in the Gayle Wilson Award
of Excellence contest for Best Series Romantic Suspense. Her current
release is POLICE BUSINESS from Harlequin Intrigue.
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*Julie Miller’s Quick Writing
Tip*
When it comes to sexual tension, here’s an easy trick for incorporating
and building that yin and yang chemistry into your story, whether you’re
writing a sweet traditional or something decidedly hotter.
It’s the rule of 3.
Think of one physical aspect of sexual attraction that gets YOUR senses
tingling--holding hands, a heated look, whispered words, a tight butt, a
solid chest, heat & humidity, rain, etc.
Now--plot that physical aspect to appear 3 times in your story, building
the intensity of the impression/sensation/contact each time. Your
building the intensity by deepening the character’s reaction to that
physical aspect.
Example:
1) hands brush accidentally in a crowded elevator and heroine feels a
self-conscious zing before quickly pulling away, 2) Hero grabs heroine’s
hand to pull her up to his pace as they run to escape the bad guys in
pursuit--she feels a sense of danger and urgency, but also feels
uniquely protected by the hero, 3) heroine confidently, seductively,
laces her fingers through the hero’s one by one, savoring each point of
contact, noting the increasing warmth and friction until their grasps
are completely connected--she’s declaring her lust, her love, her
commitment and her trust by taking a simple action and making it so
deliberate (this could be a love scene or a wedding ceremony or a
reassurance after he verbally declares his love).
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Coping With the Big R, Rejection 101
by Sherry A. Siwinski
Okay. I’ve been rejected. Again. Only
this time the rejection hurt far more than I liked. To be quite honest,
it was downright depressing, maddening, frustrating and well . . . you
get the picture. So, as a form of therapy, (hey, it’s cheaper than a
psychiatrist!) I decided to find out how other writers coped with this
nasty nine-letter word we’re all too familiar with.
I agree that
rejection is not a joyful topic, but it’s one that I feel is important
to discuss and be open about. Dealing with rejection letters alone while
waiting for the success to come, is tough. So why face it alone when
you’re not alone in receiving them? Any writer who has submitted their
work for publication has invariably been baptized with a rejection
letter or two. It’s a part of the game.
REJECTION: ONE DOWN AND
COUNTING
“I’m always making a comeback but nobody ever tells me where I’ve been,
“—Billie Holiday
Have you looked in your rejection file lately? If you have and the file
is bursting, you need to congratulate yourself. Not only does that
bulging file mean you’re writing, which is a major accomplishment in
itself, but it says you’re submitting. And submitting your work for the
world to see takes a ton of courage, and not just anyone has the guts to
put their heart and soul on the line to be criticized. You have my
upmost respect and admiration because you are trying. You get a gold
star!
“A rejection letter for each
book is like proof that you wrote that book, even if it sits in your
attic,” says aspiring author Jamie Hansen. “You don’t have a book on
your self to prove it, but a binder full of [rejection] letters will
prove you are trying and accomplishing as much as you can.”
What if your rejection file is a
little on the thin side? Then maybe you need to ask yourself why. If
you’re one of those lucky people who sold the very first book they ever
wrote the very first time they ever submitted it to a publisher, stop
reading now. Sorry, this isn’t for you. But you might want to check out
the sidebar to this article for future use, just in case. If you
aren’t one of the above-mentioned individuals, then why is your file
bordering on gauntness? If you’re new to writing and have only submitted
a few times, if at all, then I’ll give you a break and grant you a
legitimate reason for thinness.
However, if you’ve been dreaming
of selling a book for a long, long time, then maybe you need to dig a
little deeper to find the true reasons why you’re not racking up
rejection slips or better yet, sales. Anthony Robbins says in his
best-selling book, Awaken the Giant Within, “One reason so
few of us achieve what we truly want is that we never direct our focus;
we never concentrate our power.”
Hmm. Some sage advice. We could go into all sorts of reasons/excuses why
we don’t direct our focus: fear of success, lack of time, family
obligations, etc., but we won’t, that’s a topic for another article.
What we want to accomplish here is to learn how to cope with that big,
ugly R word.
The, BUT I FEEL SO ALONE, Syndrome
“Pity is treason,” —Maximilien Robespierre
The next time you open your mailbox and find a rejection letter grinning
evilly back at you, don’t think you’re alone. If you do, stop right
there and repeat these words: I am not alone. I am not alone. Now, make
sure you believe in those words. If you can’t do it on your own, then
maybe what these authors have to say can help. And always remember. We
rejection recipients are in excellent company. Not everyone can say they
have something in common with John Grisham, Madeleine L’Engle and
Stephen King, to name a few.
I contacted both published and
unpublished writers for this article and they reported they had received
anywhere from two to one hundred plus rejections on their books and have
been writing from two to sixteen years. Dani Collins, a two-time
Golden Heart Finalist is one who has received more than 100 rejections
since she started writing in 1987. Out of all of those rejections, I
asked Collins which one was the worst. “The first,” she says. “I didn’t
really believe it would happen. Not to ME.”
Lois Winston, who has been
writing since 1995 says, “When I started out, I knew less than nothing
and quickly racked up 32 rejection letters from queries sent to agents
over a six-month period. Since becoming agented, I’ve received 46
rejection letters on 10 different books.”
Garthia Anderson,(Spellbound In
Seattle, Leisure March 2003) says she’s received dozens of rejections.
“I don’t have an exact count–nor do I want to know–but my seven
manuscripts made the rounds to every agent and editor accepting in that
genre. I would occasionally get a request for a full manuscript from an
agent, but almost all the responses I got were form rejection letters.”
A TIME TO MOURN
“Let mourning stop when one’s grief is fully expressed.”—Confucius
Coping with rejection is an individual process and we wouldn’t be human
if we didn’t feel at least a little sad and disappointed when faced with
rejection. “I think it’s important that a person be allowed to
vent her frustration for a period of time,” says Margaret Daley (The
Courage to Dream, Love Inspired April 2003) “If you don’t, sometimes it
is hard to move on.”
Lois Winston also adds that it
takes her at least a week to go through the mourning process. “I get
angry. I get weepy. I yell. I whine a lot. Godiva ice cream helps!”
Sandra Crowley who has been
writing for five years says, “I only waste a couple of days rejecting a
rejection—my attention span for negatives is short.”
Kerry Swift, who has been
writing off and on for 10 years, says she gives herself a week to mourn
over a rejection, but she’s quick to add, “that’s only on the rejections
that don’t ask me to submit something else. For those that do, I get
back to work within the hour.”
Author Sylvia Rochester says she
only allows herself a couple of hours to vent her frustrations to her
writing friends via e-mail. “Then, I chill out with a cold one.”
OUCH! I’M MENTALLY CRIPPLED!
“Pain of mind is worse than pain of body.”—Publilius Syrus
Okay, so we’ve established we’re not alone when it comes to getting
unwanted rejection letters. But have you ever received a rejection that
crippled you so much you couldn’t write for weeks? Months? Maybe even a
year or more? Aspiring writer, Kelly Young, says it has taken her a
long, long time to get over her latest rejection and almost a full year
to get back into a real writing pattern where she was hopeful and
enjoying it again. “During that time it was a struggle to even think
about the writing process,” Young says. “I had a terrible time figuring
out which book to write next, whether to scrap the book I was working on
at the time, and if I should focus on a different publishing house.”
Wendy Douglas (Shades of Gray,
Harlequin Historicals March 2002) says, “if you let rejection cripple
you, then you continue to let that one thing–or that one person–drive
your life. Rejection hurts, there’s no doubt about it, but giving it
complete control over your creativity just seems self-destructive to
me.”
For Tracy Sumner, (Tides of
Passion, Zebra Books) believing in yourself and your talent is very
important in dealing with tough rejections. “Remember the real reason we
do this. Love of characters, and the genre.”
Sylvia Rochester had this advice
to offer when I asked if she’d ever struggled to get over a rejection.
“Never!” she says. “It’s all subjection. Why torment yourself over
that?” Excellent point.
TO QUIT OR NOT TO QUIT
“There is no failure except in no longer trying.”—Elbert Hubbard
Whether we’ve got one or 101 rejections in our file, we’ve all probably
had a moment, or for some of us, many moments, when we thought about
quitting. But let’s be honest. Is quitting really an option for us
writers?
Author Kate Donovan (Then He
Kissed Her, Zebra, May 2003) says she’s thought about quitting a few
times. “But, I asked myself what I’d do instead for fun and for a
creative outlet. And nothing even comes close. So I go back to writing,
because not writing is worse.”
Douglas says she considers
quitting with every rejection. “It only lasts about 10 minutes,” she
adds. “Then I get mad at myself for letting one person’s opinion affect
me so much–even if it is a person who can make or break my career.”
After facing a particularly
tough rejection, Young did some serious soul searching and journaling.
“I realized I didn’t really want to quit. So what else could I do?”
COPING AND MOVING ON
“Many of life’s failures are people who did not realize how close they
were to success when they gave up.”—Thomas Edison
Anthony Robbins also says in his book, Awaken The Giant Within,
that the most powerful way to shape our lives is to get ourselves to
take action. When you receive a rejection, you have two choices. Do as
Robbins suggests and take action, or do nothing and end up wallowing in
self-pity.
I recommend taking the action route. Too much self-pity can lead to
depression and end up being worse than the rejection ever was.
One sure way to get a handle on rejection is to keep your work in
circulation at all times. Whether it’s a query to an editor or agent, a
partial currently under consideration at a publishing house, or a
contest entry, keep at least one submission out there at all times. Make
this a rule for yourself. It’s a good way to keep that flicker of hope
burning bright within yourself. And remember. You can’t succeed if
you don’t take action.
“I try to keep in mind that all
my favorite authors went through many rejections before they published,”
says Young. “If you aren’t getting rejections, you’re not in the game.”
Swift says, “I just try to remind myself why I started in this crazy
business in the first place–I love romance novels and I had a story I
wanted to tell.”
Douglas suggests writing your
way through rejection. She recommends writing a scene, a page, something
fun, or even your fantasy. “If you can do that you can probably find the
love of writing again.”
While we are sure to face
rejection at one point or another, we don’t have to sit back and accept
it. The next time you get a rejection letter, I challenge you to learn
from it if possible, and then move on. Have that cold one and eat Godiva
if necessary. But most important, don’t give up on yourself. Keep
writing. Because that’s what it all boils down to—the writing. Besides,
if you give up now, you’ll never know if you were only one rejection
letter away from acceptance.
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Rejection After Selling by Sherry
A. Siwinski
First off, let me say that this information isn’t meant to depress you.
The purpose of sharing these authors’ stories is to prepare you for what
might lie ahead on your career path as a published author. True, writing
a good book is the most important element in selling. But educating
yourself from a business standpoint is just as important if you want to
remain on the published track once you get there.
Every author has unique
experiences during their career, but having an idea how editors work,
what publishing houses expect in sell-thru numbers on every release, and
being aware of trends, are just a few of the issues you will face after
selling. Now, as an unpublished writer, is the time to educate yourself.
And of course there is always
the issue of rejection. If you think rejection will be a word you can
axe from your vocabulary once you do sell, you need to think again.
Margaret Daley who writes for Steeple Hill Love Inspired estimates she’s
received 60-75 rejections over a 25-year period. “Just because I sold
that didn’t stop the rejections.” Daley says she finds rejection
just as hard, if not harder, to cope with now. “As a published author
the bar is raised and the pressure is greater to sell that second, then
third book and so on.”
Garthia Anderson who saw her first book released this past spring
agrees. “I think it will be harder because I have the expectation that I
sold once so I should be able to sell again.”
Wendy Douglas whose first book
was published by Harlequin Historicals in March of 2002 has discovered
how tough selling a second can be. Douglas’s editor has rejected three
proposals since she sold. After approving a fourth, Douglas wrote the
book, but it still hasn’t been accepted for publication. She is
currently writing a fifth book on which her editor approved the
synopsis, but she hasn’t officially made a second sale.
Douglas concurs with Daley and
Anderson that rejection after selling is tougher. “The thing unpublished
writers don’t understand (I certainly didn’t!) is that all the
insecurities you had before you sold stay with you! They don’t go away
just because you sold. In fact, you get a whole new crop of them in
addition to the ones you already had.”
Kensington author, Kate Donovan,
chooses to take a different perspective. “Even though [rejection] is
still devastating, I have those copies of my books sitting on the shelf
next to my desk, giving me strength. And I have letters and e-mails from
readers—perfect strangers who enjoyed my stories. So it’s easier now to
say to myself, “Okay, this one editor didn’t like it. But others have
liked my writing enough to buy it.”
When I asked Zebra author, Tracy
Sumner, if she found coping with rejection as a published author harder,
she had this to say. “I didn’t have enough rejections before I sold to
say for sure, but now it feels like I know more and should be better. I
guess I beat myself up a little for getting rejected even though I have
an agent and know editors in the business due to networking—things I
didn’t have before. It feels like I should be easier when in fact that
is not the case.”
Donovan also had this to add.
“Don’t judge a rejection on the day you receive it. Even if it’s a form
rejection, it will sound harsher to you on the day it arrives than it
will a month or so later. So digest it and put it aside. And if an
editor says she wants to see something else, BE HAPPY. Be encouraged. I
made the mistake early in my career of being so crushed by a rejection,
I didn’t send something else to a “send something else” letter for quite
a while. And guess what? The editor really meant it!”
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Today’s Romance Market, How Tight Is
Tight? by Sherry A. Siwinski
Writing is something that I have to do. I’m not satisfied unless I have
a book in progress and submissions buried out there in the mountainous
piles at the editorial offices. My dream is to be a published
romance author—to actually be able to say I have a career as a writer
and to see my manuscripts transformed into magical paperbacks like all
of those gracing the bookstore shelves.
But in order to make
that dream become a reality, I first must write, then submit. And then
comes the big kicker—I must wait. All the while I keep my fingers and
toes crossed, hoping that this submission will be the one to finally
sell and I’ll achieve the first of my goals.
I wish I had a dollar for every
day I’ve been waiting to hear on a submission. I could buy something
really nice for myself, or treat my husband and me to a romantic
European vacation. But since no one pays me for waiting, all I can hope
for is my persistence and patience will eventually bear fruit and a
publisher will buy one of my books. After all, good things come to
those who wait. Right?
I’ve been writing and submitting
for quite a few years now—you won’t hear me admitting just how many—and
during that time, I’ve noticed a few changes in the genre. Oh sure, I’ve
seen countless new lines come and go. And for years historicals
dominated the market. Now, humorous, and murderous contemporaries rule.
But the taste of the reading public isn’t what I’m referring to. No.
What I’m talking about are the long turn-around-times on our submissions
and how tight the market supposedly is today.
What happened to the days when
publishers’ guidelines claimed you could expect a response on your full
manuscript in twelve weeks? Twelve weeks?! A three-month response time
would be a blessing for such an insecure lot of individuals. But
these days, the reality is you can expect to wait a minimum of six
months on just a proposal, and eight, twelve, or more months, on a
complete. In some cases we’ve waited so long we wonder if our
manuscripts have disintegrated to dust from being devoured by paper
weevils.
So what’s happened in the last
few years that us hopefuls, and published authors, too, are forced to
wait with bated breath by our mailboxes and phones for months on end? I
decided to do a little research to see if I could find an answer. Let’s
start by taking a look at some numbers. When RWA was founded in 1980,
the organization had a membership of 37. Today that membership has grown
to approximately 8,400. Now you don’t need a math degree to figure out
that RWA has done some serious growing in the last twenty-three years.
In fact, if you break out the calculator, you’ll see that’s an average
growth rate of 365 new members a year. When I joined RWA in early 1992,
(okay so here’s a hint to my dive into this writing madness) my new
member packet stated that the membership was approximately 5,000. So if
we do a little more math, we see that RWA has grown roughly 3,400
members in the last decade which is an average of 340 new members a
year. That’s keeping very close pace with the 23-year average. Now if we
do even more math, we quickly discover that if this current growth rate
continues, RWA could possibly have a membership base of roughly 12,000
by 2012.
So what does this mean? Well,
simply put, more RWA members = more people writing and submitting =
bigger mountains at the publishers = longer turn-around-times.
Kensington author Kate Donovan (Fool Me Twice, Zebra) concurs. “I think
the number of writers has increased drastically in the last decade due
to computers and word processors which enable people (like myself) who
never would have pounded out a story on a typewriter with carbon paper,
to actually write our stories.”
But is the increase in the
number of writers the only reason publishers are taking longer to
consider manuscripts? Cheryl St. John (Christmas Gold: Colorado Bride,
Harlequin Historicals) says, “I’ve worked with several editors, and the
differences lie with the editors themselves. I’ve had proposals read
immediately and I’ve had proposals languish on a desk for months,
depending on the editor (and sometimes depending on her list of
responsibilities.) It took a year to get an offer on an option book I
just sold this January.” By the way, that long wait was on Cheryl’s
twentieth sale.
Darlene Scalera (May The Best
Man Wed, Harlequin American) had this to share. “I’m fortunate that
after my first sale, the rejection/acceptance process has always been
accomplished in a timely manner (within two weeks) and I largely credit
my editor for the terrific turn-around. But I’m aware this is not always
the norm.”
Best-selling author Christine
Feehan (Dark Symphony, Berkley) commented, “Submissions seem to take
longer as the editors are very overworked.”
Which leads us to the second
reason submission times have slowed down. Many publishing houses have
merged over the years, and as with any corporate merger, jobs are often
combined and even sometimes eliminated all together because of the
bottom line. It only stands to reason that if there are fewer houses to
submit to, then you have fewer editors to handle the submissions.
But are there really fewer houses? Again I did a little research. I dug
out all of my old RWRs (yes, I still have the very first issue I
received) and I studied the annual January Market Update starting with
the year 1993. I quickly discovered that even with all the mergers over
the years, the 2003 RWR Market Update listed 29 possible markets for our
books. That’s six more than in 1993. Over the last decade the average
number of houses complied in the list was 22. We have more market
options today than we did yesterday. Good news.
So, this discovery makes me
question my memory again. Are the publishers really taking longer to
consider our manuscripts than they did ten or even five years ago? Or
does it just seem that way?
In our fast paced, instant gratification society, have we grown
increasingly impatient? Well, just to make sure that memory of mine
wasn’t way off kilter, I did some more double checking. In the 1996
edition of the Romance Writer’s Sourcebook, (Writer’s Digest Books)
publishers reported response times on queries as an average of 3-6
weeks, and 8-12 weeks on complete manuscripts. To further my search, I
pulled out my bulging file of rejection slips and noticed many of them
were received around that three-month mark. And as with any rule, there
were a few exceptions that languished into the one year, or more,
territory. There were even a few submissions that I never actually
received a rejection slip for, but we won’t go there. That’s another
article, Submitting When You Shouldn’t.
Okay, I’m feeling better about
my memory, even though I’m feeling a little depressed now after perusing
through all those rejection slips. But at least my memory isn’t wacked.
Thank goodness for that. Let’s move on and take at look at RWA’s
2002 Romance Fiction Statistic Report compiled by Libby Hall. Libby’s
report states that 2,143 romances were published in 2001, down by 146
titles from 2000, and down by 380 titles from 1999. That doesn’t sound
encouraging. But if you read her comments about the report in the
October 2002 issue of the RWR, you soon discover maybe that isn’t as bad
as it first sounds. Libby says that this drop could be attributed to
“the diversity creeping into our genre and into the careers of
member-authors of RWA.” Libby goes on to point out that only “novels
marketed as a romance” were included in the study. Any novel marketed as
“women’s fiction” was not.
So this brings us to our burning
question. Given the current situation of more writers and fewer, and
extremely overworked editors, is it really tougher to sell a book these
days? Is the market really that tight? “I think it’s always been
difficult,” says Kathleen Nance (Enchantment, Leisure Books) “I can’t
speak for ten years ago, but I do think there are higher quality
submissions today. And I think there are more authors selling to the
publishers, so there are fewer slots per author.”
Cheryl St.John says, “All
sources indicate that it’s the economy and the market. Even the big
names are selling fewer number of books than in years past. As all the
publishers tighten their belts, it stands to reason that editors must be
more selective than ever.”
Darlene Scalera commented,
“Shrinking midlists, reissues of earlier books, the rise of the
conglomerate bookstores, even increasing paper costs, are only a few of
the factors conspiring against authors today. But selling a book has
never been an easy process. It’s the nature of the publishing beast.”
Maureen McKade (Journey Of The
Heart, Berkley, June 2004) says, “I believe editors are looking for more
specific stories today. For example, if their house is leaning more
toward lighter romance because that’s what’s been their hot sellers,
then everything (contemporary and historical) submitted will be
considered more at that level.” McKade believes the changing culture has
also dictated this shift. “We need to attract younger readers who’ve
grown up with computers and sharp, sassy television shows.”
Christine Feehan adds, “The
changes I’ve noticed are in the buying trends. Houses seem to put out
calls for the same types of material which then floods the market the
following year which then changes the trend to something else.”
Kate Donovan says, “Ten years
ago, I felt like publishers were willing to experiment a little. Five
years ago, the door seemed closed on certain subgenres. Now it’s
loosening up again. These days, you can find a home for a gothic, a
paranormal, chick lit, erotica, regencies, traditional romance, romantic
comedy—virtually everything! So even though it gets harder every day to
sell a book, this is the best time I’ve ever seen for finding a home for
a great-but-off-the-wall sort of book. If I were a new writer who had
two ideas—a crazy one and a traditional one—I’d do the crazy one first,
because this portal might not be open forever.”
Maureen McKade offers this sage
advice. “Speaking strictly from my own experience, I found that I would
rather write what I love rather than try to write something my heart
isn’t involved in. It took me almost three years to make another sale
because I stuck with writing westerns when very few were being bought.
During this soul-searching time, I also found I wanted to try a romantic
suspense, which I did. I was very fortunate to find a house which wanted
both types of books. But there were times in the last couple of years
where I despaired of ever selling again. In my opinion, you can spend
your time chasing rainbows in the hopes of finding that pot of gold, or
you could stay in one place and that pot of gold might just find you.”
On another positive note—Gerri
Russell wrote in her “First Sales” year-end report, (RWR, Feb. 2003)
“reported” first sales for 2002 totaled 85. That’s up 22 sales over
2001. Hurrah!
Okay, so after all this, what
conclusions have, we made? Is today’s romance market super tight? Are
your odds of winning the Lottery better than selling your book? Let’s
review.
1. RWA is bigger than ever and still growing.
2. Editors are seriously overworked.
3. There are more houses publishing romance novels today than ten years
ago.
4. There were fewer “romance” titles published in 2001.
5. “Reported” first sales were up for 2002.
Well, I’m no expert, but I’d say
that as long as the romance market stays as strong in the future has it
has in the past, the first two numbers aren’t going to change. Hopefully
number three will hold true and the houses publishing romance will
continue to grow for many years to come. And fourth, well, as long as
RWA members are selling and readers are buying, that’s always good news,
for all of us. And five, Gerri’s report is proof that first-time authors
are selling.
Over the last eleven years there
is one thing I’ve noticed that hasn’t changed. There has been one
constant. Authors are still saying, (as they did in 1992, 95, 98, 2002)
“It’s tough to get published. It’s always been tough to get published.”
Now I wish I had a dollar for every time I’ve heard that, too!
But I believe the future is
bright for first-time, and multi published authors both. As long as we
continue to strive to write the best books we can each and every time,
and continue to submit them, even if the editors remain overworked,
eventually something has to click. And when we do click, we can look
back on all those rejection slips and be reminded of what it took for us
to sell. Knowing we’ve paid our dues, we can smile and say, (to borrow a
title from Barry Manilow!) Looks Like We Made It.
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Before the First Sale by Renee Halverson
Now that the shock of my first sale is slowly ebbing, I find I’m finally
ready to share my dirty little secret with you. No, not that one. (Sheesh!)
The secret I’m talking about isn’t really a secret; it’s more a painful
admission.
I wasn’t prepared to sell.
Seriously. I’d spent five years perfecting my pre-published mantra. You
know the one: Persist-submit-persist-submit-persist-submit. I said this
so often I even had strangers believing it would happen for me. I just
never believed it myself.
But sure enough, in November of 2001, I got the shock of my life. I sold
a book to a New York publishing house,
Guess what. If you perfect the mantra, work hard, and hone your craft,
you might get ‘the call’, too. That’s right. One day, when you’re least
expecting it, an editor just might call you on the telephone and tell
you she wants to buy your book.
But will you be prepared? Or will you end up wasting a good month and a
half working on things you could have done long before you made that
first sale? I should know. This happened to me.
All right, so maybe you’re thinking you don’t want to jinx that sale by
being over-confident. Or, maybe, like me, deep down in your heart, you
truly don’t believe such a miracle will ever happen to you. To that, I
say, “Let me be your better judgment.”
First, have professional pictures taken. Now. This seems silly, I know.
Do it anyway. Before you have to go through countless sittings because
you can’t bear THAT picture on the back cover of your book. Then again,
after the sale, you might get an early release date and find you don’t
have the luxury of suffering through several sittings. Surely, you don’t
want to find yourself in a situation where you have to settle with a
picture you would rather rip to shreds (yes, again, this happened to
me).
Got your pictures? Good. Next, get a website started. At the very least,
get ownership of your domain name. Before November, this seemed
senseless to me. I kept thinking, “Why do I need a website? I don’t have
any fans.” Well, here’s why. Websites are complicated, which means if
you try the do-it-yourself method we’re talking TIME. Lots and lots of
TIME. TIME you could spend finishing your next book (AKA your next
sale). You may think, hey, I’ll just hire someone to do the work for me.
News flash, professional website design is expensive. Even if you find
someone to design the beast at a reasonable cost you still have to write
all the copy, organize all the information, decide which navigation
buttons you want, color schemes, excerpts, links . . . In a word, PHEW.
Okay, so you have your pictures, your website is done, now you need to
start a mailing list. Make sure you put all those names and addresses in
a computer file where updates and changes will be simple. This is one of
the most tedious chores I have ever undertaken. What was I thinking? All
that time I spent playing computer solitaire I could have been entering
addresses into a mail file. So, where do you begin? Your Christmas card
list, of course. Add all your friendly RWA chapter members. Friends of
your mother, ladies of your PTA list, your Junior League buddies, your
sorority alumni gang . . . you get the idea. Start now. You’ll be
surprised at how many people you already know.
Finally, start looking for a media/entertainment/publishing lawyer. Even
if you already have an agent (you lucky dog) you still want to have a
lawyer look at the contract. If you are that lucky dot I mentioned
above, you could always use the lawyer who reviewed the contract you
signed with your agent. A side note: Don’t worry if you don’t have an
agent when you make the ale, you can negotiate your contract without
one. Just go in armed with as much information as you can gather from
other authors and your savvy lawyer.
Well, that’s it. A list of all the things I should have done before I
sold my first book. Hope this saves you many, many headaches. Right now,
I’m off to finish all of the above so I can get back to what started all
this mess in the first place–the writing.
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What Makes a Successful Writer? by Renee
Halverson
When I decided to join Romance Writers of America,
I thought I was on my way toward realizing my dream of a multi-published
writing career. But I soon discovered I was just one of thousands of
other members. How could that be? Did that many other romance writers
exist in this world?
Refusing to let this extraordinary number daunt me, I focused on
learning my craft. As that first year drew to a close, I started
noticing something interesting. Only a small fraction of those RWA
members were successfully realizing their dream.
I wanted to know why. Why did some writers make it in this business
while others floundered? What qualities did the successful authors have
that the rest of us didn’t?
Never one to sit back and ponder when I can take action instead, I set
out to find my answers. I studied successful authors in person. I
attended booksignings, took notes. I asked questions. Begged for advice.
Made phone calls. Scheduled lunches. Well . . . you get the idea.
At first glance the successful authors didn’t seem any different than
the rest of us. But, oh, were they ever.
So what makes a successful author stand out above the rest?
• A successful author sets goals. More to the point, she achieves her
stated goals. She has the drive and persistence to work toward her
dreams, even in the face of failure. She never quits. Nor does she buy
into the notion that earning a publishing contract is a crapshoot. She
takes fate into her own hands, believing that luck occurs when
preparation and opportunity meet.
• The successful author writes with confidence and passion. She is in
the business for the joy of writing, not the fame and money. At some
point, she decides to trust her own instincts, to rely on her own
writing process. She takes calculated risks, never settling for what
others tell her she should or should not do. In other words, she refuses
to produce generic work. The results are magical.
• The successful author finishes manuscripts. This is so huge I have to
say it again. SHE FINISHES MANUSCRIPTS. There is absolutely no other way
to create a successful, multi-published writing career. Even the
one-book-wonder had to finish that one book. Let’s face it, a request
for a complete manuscript means very little without a finished piece of
work to send to the interested editor.
• The successful author specializes. In other words, she’s found her
niche. For a very few, this includes writing in more than one sub-genre.
But for the typical successful author, this means concentrating her
talents into the areas that best fit her strengths as a writer. She’s
decisive and sticks with what works for her, branching out when it’s
time for her to grow.
• The successful author continually hones her craft. She never allows
herself to become complacent. She writes to her strengths, but she also
addresses her weaknesses. She consistently works to become better. She
looks to the future and believes in possibilities.
So, there you have it. The five qualities all successful authors share.
Can you too attain these characteristics? I believe so. But I won’t lie
and tell you it will be easy. If you’re still willing, ask yourself the
following questions.
1. Are you bold enough to try, even in the face of rejection?
2. Are you committed to do the work, even if success comes slowly?
If you answered a resounding yes to both questions, you’re more than
half way there. Happy writing!
Thanks to her husband’s career in radio broadcasting Renee Halverson has
lived all over the country, settling most recently in Lincoln, Nebraska.
A former cheerleading coach and high school teacher, she now writes full
time. Renee’s first novel, EXTREME MEASURES, won Dorchester Publishing’s
New Historical Voice contest. It was released as a Leisure Book in July
of 2002.
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A “DAMN SKIPPY” Chat with JANET
EVANOVICH by Sherry Siwinski
Every once in a while I get a hair brained idea. A
couple months ago I had just one of those moments and decided I wanted
to interview Janet Evanovich. Then I thought, “Yeah, right, like she’s
going to want to talk to me!” Well, I was just brave enough to send her
an e-mail and ask. I thought, “What the heck. The worst that can happen
is she’ll tell me no. The best that can happen is she’ll tell me yes.”
And, well . . . lucky for me . . . she said yes! See, it does pay to
throw caution to the wind once in a while. You just never know what
might happen.
I’ve loved Stephanie Plum from the get-go. When ONE FOR THE MONEY came
out in the mid ‘90s, I was an assistant manager at Waldenbooks. I now
wish I’d had the foresight to buy that baby in hardcover. A first
edition copy would be a nice conversation piece to put on my keeper
shelf. Little did I know what a success Janet’s Stephanie Plum series
would become. Of course, I like to think that even us local booksellers
had a smidgen to do with her success. We all devoured ONE and hand-sold
it like crazy.
But for all Janet’s success, she started out just like everyone else: At
the bottom. She received a box full of rejections, and she even claims
she burned them, before finally getting the call.
“It took me ten years to sell,” Janet says, “and I wrote three
manuscripts that never sold.”
Janet’s first sale was to the Second Chance at Love line and she cashed
a check for a whopping $2,000.00. With such an obscene amount of money
in her pocket, Janet kissed her secretarial career goodbye and began
writing full time. She wrote series romance for five years, but after 12
novels she decided she needed a change and switched to the mystery
genre. Janet liked the idea of being able to use more action and use
less internal monologue. During the two years it took her to create
Stephanie Plum, she hung out with members of the law enforcement
community, learned to handle a gun, and perfected her cussing skills.
Sherry Siwinski: Where did the idea for Stephanie Plum come from, and
did you ever have any idea she'd become so popular?
Janet Evanovich: Stephanie is a composite of me, my daughter Alex and my
favorite
romance heroines. When I started the series, I HOPED Stephanie Plum
would be popular.
SS: I've read that you knew nothing about the bail bonds industry. Did
you find the research that you had to do daunting, and did you worry
about getting the facts right?
JE: The research was a little strange at first. I wasn't used to hanging
out with guys who carry guns. And yes, I worried about getting the facts
right. I still worry about it and usually have one of my cop friends
read my manuscript before I send it to my publisher.
SS: Out of all the Plum novels you've now written, do you have a
favorite, or a favorite scene?
JE: I like the new one, HARD EIGHT. I think the crime is interesting and
the book is well constructed. My favorite scene would have to be the
rabbit in the parking lot.
Ooh! A rabbit in the parking lot? I can’t wait to read what that’s all
about. HARD EIGHT goes on sale June 18, and the paperback edition of
SEVEN UP went on sale June 5.
SS: Some writers compare writing to sweating blood. I like Stephanie and
the gang so much, I'd think they'd be a breeze to write. Of course the
grass is always greener on someone else’s keyboard! Do you ever sweat
blood when writing the Plum novels, or do you find them a "breeze" to
write? Can you tell me why?
JE: I work very hard to make my books easy to read. I'm a slow writer
and no book has ever been a breeze. Books are most fun when you're done
with them.
Amen, brother! I can attest to that.
SS: You wrote a number of books for Bantam Loveswept and Second Chance
at Love. Do you feel those publishing credits helped you sell ONE FOR
THE MONEY? Or was it like starting from scratch since you were trying to
sell a totally different type of book?
JE: The fact that I had twelve books in print definitely helped me sell
the Plum series. Still, I sold ONE for a very small amount of money and
struggled with a small print run on that first Plum book.
SS: I heard you will be re releasing one of your earlier books, FULL
HOUSE, and expanding it with the help of Charlotte Huges. Was this your
idea, your publisher, or was it the fact your fans just can't seem to
get enough of your writing?
JE: For years now my fans have been asking for more books. And for years
I've had book ideas that I haven't been able to get to. Charlotte and I
have been friends since we were Loveswept authors together and thought
it would be fun to work together on a project. The way it's going to
work is that I work with Charlotte on the initial outline, Charlotte
does the bulk of the new writing, and then I help edit the finished
product.
Mark your calendars, FULL HOUSE is due in stores on September 3.
SS: For us writers who have yet to reach the pinnacle of the New York
Times Bestseller list, or have never gone on major book signing tours,
can you describe those experiences for us? (Just so we know what to
expect when we make it!)
JE: Seeing your name on a national list is a thrill. It's validation for
all the hard times. A book tour is exhausting and often frustrating. The
travel part of the tour sucks. The meeting the fans part is terrific.
The media part is terrifying. Bring granola bars or you'll never get
anything to eat!
Janet starts another book tour this month, but the closest she’ll make
it to us is on June 29, when she’ll be signing at Sam’s Club in Des
Peres, Missouri. Darn it. Maybe someday we’ll get lucky and she’ll make
it as close as Omaha. But speaking of media, Janet made a television
commercial this past March to promote HARD EIGHT. The commercial is
scheduled to air this
month.
SS: What do you find to be the worst & best parts of writing? The
creative aspect, the business end, the clamoring fans, fame and fortune?
JE: Fame is an illusion and inconvenient. Fortune ain't bad. The fans
are family. Writing the book, hard as it is, is always the best part.
Speaking of business, Janet’s family helps out in that department.
“After we moved to New Hampshire, we realized there was more to this
writing stuff than just writing, so we formed a family business,
Evanovich, Inc,” Janet says. Today, her husband, Pete, manages all
aspects of the business and tries to keep Janet on time. “An impossible
job!” she says. Her son, Peter, takes care of the financial end, while
her daughter, Alex, handles the web site, the newsletter, the graphics,
the comics, and the online advertising. They get about a million hits a
month on the site. Now that’s a lot of traffic!
SS: You said you're contracted through book ten with the Plum series and
that you're having fun writing the books. Is it getting to be more of a
challenge though, to come up with fresh & intriguing storylines? Do you
feel the pressure to deliver?
JE: Probably I felt more pressure early on in the series. I got good
reviews for ONE and after that I always felt like I was playing CAN YOU
TOP THIS. I think I've relaxed a little in the last couple years and
don't feel the same sort of pressure to deliver. Or maybe it's that my
life is so filled I don't have time to worry!
SS: I always save the next Plum novel as a reward for myself when I
accomplish a goal with my own writing. I do this because once I start
reading, I can't put it down and everything else goes by the wayside.
What do you feel is/are the key element(s) to creating a nonstop read?
JE: Clean, spare writing. Lovable, interesting characters. A dead body
early
on in the book.
If you’ve read any number of Janet’s books, you know dead bodies do show
up a lot, and usually an explosion isn’t far behind. And just in case
you can’t get enough of Stephanie Plum and her friends, you’re in for an
extra treat this year. Janet is currently working on a short Plum novel
to be released November 5. Here’s a little sneak peek. “VISIONS OF SUGAR
PLUMS takes Stephanie Plum on a holiday adventure and introduces a new
character that readers will flip for! He’s as mysterious as Ranger, as
sexy as Morelli, and . . . well, we won’t say any more.”
Hmm? I can’t wait!
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A Chat With Christine Feehan by
Sherry A. Siwinski
Disoriented, he woke deep within the ground.
The first sensation he felt was hunger. It was no ordinary hunger, but
one of gut-wrenching, skin-crawling necessity. He was starving. Every
cell in his body demanded nourishment. He lay there in silence while the
hunger gnawed at him like a rat. It attacked not only his body, but also
his mind so that he feared for all other, humans and Carpathians alike.
Feared for himself. Feared for his soul. This time the darkness was
spreading fast and his soul was in jeopardy.
So begins Dark Legend by Christine Feehan, just one of the many books in
the Dark Series that has propelled her onto the USA Today, and
Waldenbooks Bestseller Lists. With seventeen books sold, eleven which
are currently in print, two due out this year, and several scheduled for
next year, it’s a wonder this author has time for much of anything else.
But that’s not all. During the release month of one of Feehan’s books,
she can expect upwards of a 1,000 pieces of fan mail to cross her desk
and computer screen. All of which she tries very hard to answer.
Feehan says she’s been writing
from the moment she knew what a sentence was. She loves every kind of
book there is, but in order for her to be completely satisfied, there
has to be a romance in the story somewhere. And she has to have the
happily ever after. So it was only natural she decided to write romance.
Sherry Siwinski: Tell us about your first sale.
Christine Feehan: I was lucky. My agent had worked with Alicia Condon of
Dorchester in the past and asked her to read the book. Most houses told
us they would not touch vampire. She tried to explain Carpathians
weren't vampires but we couldn't get anyone to read the manuscript. (One
editor did, loved it but couldn't get the okay for it) Alicia read it
and bought it. I was very lucky. Dorchester worked hard for me. They
took a chance putting out three books a year which wasn't easy for
publishing or marketing as they couldn't get my sales figures fast
enough. When my agent called me, saying they wanted the book, I had been
so certain no one would buy it, that I actually told her I wasn't
certain I wanted to sell and I had to think it over. I totally
panicked!! I'm certain my poor agent thought I was crazy.
SS: For those readers who have yet to try your Dark series, can you
explain the differences between a Carpathian and a Vampire?
CF: A Carpathian is a species of people coexisting with humans. They
have many special gifts
such as shape shifting, but they also have many problems. A Carpathian
is honorable and does his best to follow the laws of his people and
protect those weaker than he is. A vampire is wholly evil and takes
pleasure in depraved behavior.
SS: How did the series come about?
CF: I was in a very dark place
in my life and needed to find hope, so the Carpathians were born with
all the darkness in their lives but seeking the light and eventually
finding it!
SS: Your series started with Dark Prince. Is it necessary to read the
books in the order they were
released?
CF: No, each book was meant to be read as a stand alone book. The
stories are a richer read in order, as the history of the people and
many other smaller details are added, but if any reader picks up a book
in the middle it would be no different than reading a paranormal
romance.
SS: You've now sold to Berkley. Tell us about that and what readers have
to look forward to.
CF: I am hoping to continue to put out three books a year. I would like
to do the Dark series,
perhaps a shape shifter series and paranormal psychic contemporary
series. I have many ideas and I hope to be able to try them all!
SS: Do you plan to continue the Dark series for Leisure?
CF: At the moment I'm writing for Berkley and hope to do the Dark books
for them. I loved writing for Leisure, it was a very positive experience
for me and would love to work with them again, so you just never know.
SS: What is your writing schedule?
CF: I write at least eight hours a day. I also do another couple of
hours of mail and interviews and research. It is full time, but I love
to write so it works for me. I take my breaks around my children's
schedule and also try to go for mini-walks often during the day. Close
to a deadline, if I've fallen behind, I will put in more hours.
SS: You've written several anthologies. In your opinion, are they harder
or easier to write because of the short length?
CF: For me, writing anthologies is much more difficult. I am very wordy
and have never
written short stories, not even when I was young. It's a new experience
and I try very hard to make the story as full as possible. I spent a
great deal of time researching other anthologies and shorter series
stories to see how authors set them up.
SS: Do you think anthologies can be a boon to an author's career?
CF: You know, I don't honestly know the answer to this. I would have
said no before because I never ever read anthologies myself, but I've
received hundreds of letters from readers who found me in an anthology
so in rethinking the issue, I would have to say those readers might not
have found me!
SS: What are some things about the publishing business that you know now
that you wished you had known before you sold?
CF: I wish I had known the business end. I didn't think of slots, or
print runs or marketing or even booksignings. I just concentrated on
writing and when the rest of it came up, I was unprepared.
SS: What is your favorite thing about writing?
CF: The absolute adventure of writing. For me it is like a great movie
unfolding in my mind with all the little details up to me. If it isn't
to my satisfaction I can change the scenery and look
and feel of it until it is. Until I can live and breathe the adventure.
I love that.
SS: What do you dislike about writing?
CF: The business end is the most difficult for me. I am not someone who
does well if the
strict truth isn't told to me. I don't like having to check on things
that should have been done and taken care of by someone else. I much
prefer losing myself in the writing but the business end is a BIG part
of publishing so learn it! Become as knowledgeable as you can!
SS: Any advice for those trying to make that first sale?
CF: Keep trying. Often a rejection has nothing to do with your writing.
I know several
lines were closed for a period of months and authors were rejected with
a standard rejection letter. The publishing house was not buying for
those lines and so the manuscripts weren't read. It is also ONE person's
opinion. Reading is subjective. I was rejected at one house because my
book went to an editor who didn't like paranormal and wasn't in charge
of that division. The paranormal editor contacted me asking me for
something and when I expressed surprise, she was upset the book hadn't
been passed on to her. So keep trying. Never give up. It will happen and
while you're waiting, enjoy the writing of your next book.
SS: How about some advice for staying published?
CF: Write the best books you can and keep your passion for writing. Yes,
it is a business, but you started writing because you love to write, not
because you wanted to be published. If you don't love to write you
shouldn't be doing it. Write what your characters dictate, not what you
think the readers and editors want. Write with a market in mind but use
your own voice. Watch that you don't over critique yourself into a
generic voice. It's easy when you read reviews and get hundreds of
letters to start changing how you write and that isn't what you want. Be
true to your writing always and keep your passion for it going.
The complete Dark Series includes eight books: Dark Prince, Dark Desire,
Dark Gold, Dark Magic, Dark Challenge, Dark Fire, Dark Legend, and
coming in May 2002, Dark Guardian. Anthologies include three:
Fantasy–The Awakening, A Very Gothic Christmas–After the Music, and
After Twilight–Dark Dream. Also watch for The Scarletti Curse, a Leisure
Candleglow romance, and coming in September of 2002, Lair of the Lion.
Sherry Siwinski is a founding member and past president of the
Prairieland Romance Writers. A member of RWA since 1992, she has
published more than 50 newspaper and magazine articles. She also has her
own promotional business, JustAFew Promotions. Ever the optimistic, she
plans on one day promoting her own books.
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Single in
the City: A Writing Affair by Cara Summers, Kristin Gabriel, and Heather
MacAllister
Foreplay
“We’re asking our authors to come up with new ideas for miniseries. Do
you have any?”
That was the question Harlequin Temptation’s Brenda Chin asked Cara
Summers shortly after RWA’s conference in Washington, DC.
“Think about it,” Brenda said. “It might be fun if Cara Summers, Heather
MacAllister and Kristin Gabriel worked on a miniseries together.”
Cara’s head was spinning as she hung up the phone. She knew that Heather
and Kristin were fun, creative, and that they wrote great books.
And it just so happened that she did have an idea for a Temptation
miniseries involving three single girls in different cities and a skirt
that had the power to draw men like a magnet.
Still, when she called Brenda back the next day and pitched the premise,
she had no idea that she was letting myself in for one of the most
stimulating and enjoyable writing experiences of her career.
When it comes to collaboration, foreplay is the best part. Three heads
are definitely better than one at brainstorming (and coming up with
crazy ideas)! When the three of us talked for the first time, all we had
was the basic idea Cara had pitched to Brenda.
Immediately, Heather said, “Wouldn’t it be fun if they tossed the skirt
instead of the bouquet at their weddings?” (Out of that question alone
came the prologues and epilogues that tie the three books together. And
it meant that our characters had to appear in all three books. More
collaboration was needed!)
Kristin’s first question was: “Where did the skirt come from?” (That
sparked the creation of an isolated island in the South Pacific where
the skirt was woven from the fibers of a magic plant!)
Then the questions and answers really began to flow over our emails:
“What does the skirt look like?” “What do the heroes see in the skirt
that the heroines can’t?” “How can it fit all three heroines?” (Cara got
a minor character for her book out of that one!)
The brainstorming continued nonstop as we each wrote our books - and in
the process we created the idea for the next three books in the
miniseries!
Doin' It
As in any good relationship, an important part of collaboration is
communication. All three of us were excited to begin our books and the
emails continued to fly.
We knew it was important for each of us to write a good story that could
stand on its own, yet weave those stories together to create a
compelling miniseries. The consummation of our collaboration was both
challenging and fun.
Once we nailed down the premise of the miniseries, we exchanged
information about our characters and a brief plot summary. Finer details
had to be worked out, too. Like the timeline and the backstory of the
heroines’ friendship. New questions emerged as we each worked on our
individual story. Email and chocolate became daily habits as we neared
our deadlines.
Which brings us to the key component of a successful
collaboration--the ability of the authors to work together as a team. We
always strived to reach a consensus while
putting this project together. And through it all, we treated each other
with respect. Which is another facet of a good relationship. We think
anyone who reads the
Single in the City miniseries will agree this one
is a success!
Afterglow
After, uh, doin’ it, our collaboration continued. We'd written these
utterly fab books (really! truly!) and we wanted people to know about
them. Besides, promotion split three ways yields three times the
exposure at one-third the cost in time and money. Seemed like a deal.
Once again, the emails flowed. We decided how much time and money we
wanted to spend and how we were going to spend it.
The RWA conference approached and our covers weren’t yet available, so
we asked the Harlequin PR department if we could use the SINGLE IN THE
CITY cover flash. Carolyn submitted the formal request and Heather
bugged them.
The artwork was ready less than a week before the conference but in time
to make the deadline for the fall issue of Romance $ells. Heather and
Carolyn, whose book comes out in December, took out ads. All three of us
took out ads in the winter issue. In the meantime, Kristin looked into
getting a domain name. Dot com was taken, so we went dot org--for orgy.
No, not really, but that's what we tell people. Anyway, Kristin
registered the name, got the web space and Heather did the web page. We
sent book excerpts to Carolyn, who did brochures and brought them to the
conference.
It all went incredibly smoothly--so smoothly, that we immediately
decided to write another round of SINGLE IN THE CITY books. This time,
our heroines will share an apartment in New York City. And after that .
. . the skirt is thinking about a trip to San Francisco!
******
SINGLE IN THE CITY--It's a dating wasteland out there!
A miniseries from Harlequin Temptation
MOONSTRUCK IN MANHATTAN by Cara Summers (December 2001)
TEMPTED IN TEXAS by Heather MacAllister (January 2002)
SEDUCED IN SEATTLE by Kristin Gabriel (February 2002) |
Collaboration Do’s and Don’ts by Cara Summers, Kristin Gabriel, and
Heather MacAllister
Do make sure your editor is part of the team.
She's the one who can persuade marketing to give the project a big push.
Do work with authors whose work you like and whose style meshes well
with yours.
Do check to make sure there’s not duplication of basic storylines or
subplots.
Don’t make changes to the basic premise after everyone has started
writing.
Do coordinate writing schedules so the books can be written close
together and meet your deadlines. Release dates, marketing schedules and
promotion all hinge on sticking to schedule.
Do plan ahead. If this miniseries is a success, can you make time in
your writing schedule for more?
Don't be afraid to share your ideas. In any kind of relationship, trust
is essential.
Do save copies of emails-including the ones you wrote!
Do share responsibility for promotion or even passing information along
to your editor so that no one feels overworked.
Do eat lots of chocolate.
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A WRITER’S DREAM COME TRUE A Chat
with author Jane Sullivan by Sherry A. Siwinski
I first learned about author Jane Sullivan from her brochure called,
Test Your Writing Personality. After taking her short quiz, I flipped
over to the back to her bio. Instantly I was impressed with what this
writer had accomplished in such a short, and I mean short, period of
time. After all, we are talking about the publishing business here.
Being a Golden Heart finalist in 1999 was just the beginning for
Sullivan. She went on to sell that manuscript, STRAY HEARTS,(August
2000) to Harlequin Duets. Then in February of this year, she sold her
second book to Duets. In May she sold a single title romantic comedy to
Ballantine, which lead to a two-book contract. Sounds like a writer’s
dream come true to me. But wait. There’s more! One week after
making the deal with Ballantine, Sullivan sold a book to Harlequin
Temptation.
Boy, talk about an impressive year. And it’s not even over yet. Since
I’m always eager to learn more about this crazy profession/obsession
I’ve chosen, I knew I had to email this talented lady and find out how
all of this came about for her.
SS: How long have you been writing, and what made you decide to write
romance?
JS: I studied Professional Writing at the University of Oklahoma more
than twenty years ago, but I didn't write again with a serious eye
toward publication until about fiveyears ago. I had a short story
published and was working on a young adult mystery, when a friend handed
me five romances from her keeper shelf. They were wonderful stories by
incredibly talented writers, and it was then
that I knew I wanted to write romance.
SS: When you first started writing, did you know you wanted to write
romantic comedies?
JS: No. My first book was a romantic suspense novel, which didn't sell,
but I learned a lot writing it. When Harlequin started their Love &
Laughter line, I thought I'd give romantic comedy a try. By the time I
finished STRAY HEARTS, that line had evolved into Harlequin Duets.
SS: How many manuscripts did you write before making that first sale?
JS: I started about three or four different manuscripts, but I completed
only one of them before writing STRAY HEARTS, which was the first book I
sold.
SS: Do you attribute your first sale to the Golden Heart?
JS: I attribute the speed of my first sale to the Golden Heart. If you
final, it brings your work to the attention of the judging editor and
lets you bypass months in the slush pile. Still, I believe that if
you've got a great book, they're going to buy it. It just may take a
little longer.
SS: STRAY HEARTS, is centered around an animal shelter. Are you a big
animal lover? How did the story come about? JS: I do love animals, which
made that book a blast to write. But the idea actually began with the
Disney movie, THE MIGHTY DUCKS, which is the story of a man who does
something rotten, is sentenced to coach a kid's hockey team and finds
love and happiness in the process. Then I visited an animal shelter and
came up with the idea for STRAY HEARTS. It's the story of an
animal-fearing woman who thinks her cheating ex-fiancé deserves to pay
for his
indiscretion, so she gets a grooming service to shave his snooty,
prizewinning Cocker Spaniels. She's sentenced to community service at an
animal shelter, where she meets the resident veterinarian and falls in
love. Taking existing stories and giving them your own unique spin is an
excellent way to generate ideas.
SS: Let’s take a moment and talk some more about your writing process.
When you start getting a snippet of an idea for a story, what hits you
first? Characters or storyline?
JS: For me, it's always different. I will say, though, that it's
probably best to develop strong characters before getting all engrossed
in a plot, because you simply can't build a good romance novel on a
really cool plot and weak characters. On the other hand, you can
sometimes skate by
with a so-so plot if your characters are wonderful. Of course, it's best
to deliver both!
SS: When creating your characters, do you use someone as amodel for
their looks and mannerisms?
JS: No. I go by what my mind's eye is telling me that character looks
like. I've tried the photo thing before, but I always wander back to
what I'm seeing in my own head.
SS: How do you prefer to plot your books? Detailed outlines, a 10-page
synopsis, note cards?
JS: I plot by the seat of my pants. I'd love to be one of those writers
who can outline a book, then stick to the outline. I'm not. Selling on
proposal has forced me to write synopses ahead of time, which is a good
thing because it gives me a road map to follow, but I hate doing it. I
also skip around a lot when I write, never following a chronological
order, and then I put all the pieces together like a jigsaw puzzle. And
sitting down and writing a complete first draft without editing along
the way is inconceivable to me. I'd like to be more methodical, but my
brain just doesn't work that way.
SS: In the last year, you've sold four more books. Share with us how all
of this came about for you.
JS: It was crazy there for a while! I sold my first Duets in September
of 1999, then pitched an idea for the second Duets to my editor in
November and got a go-ahead to do a proposal. They bought that book in
February of 2000. Soon after that I sent my editor a proposal for
Temptation.
Then my single-title romantic comedy proposal went out toseveral
publishers. In May 2000, just over a month after submission, Ballantine
made an offer on it and wanted a two-book contract. A week later my
editor at Harlequin bought the Temptation!
SS: Wow! With so much happening over the last year, do you sometimes
feel overwhelmed by it all? If so, how do you deal with it?
JS: Overwhelmed? You bet! I sold four books on proposal in a matter of a
few months. It was the most exciting thing I've ever experienced, but
then I came down from the high and realized I had to deliver. I'm
thrilled at the opportunity I've been given to write for both Harlequin
and Ballantine, and I'm knocking myself out to make sure I give them the
best books I possibly can.
SS: How has becoming a published author changed your life?
JS: I can finally see the light at the end of the tunnel. I know if I
work hard enough, I can eventually realize my dream of making a living
doing what I love to do--write. Selling these books has enabled me to
cut back to part-time on my job. Eventually I intend to get rid of it
altogether!
SS: Tell us about your writing schedule. Do you work at it five days a
week? Do you have a page-a-day quota?
JS: I try to get the work done on my part-time job in the morning, then
devote the rest of the day to writing. My husband and daughter are very
helpful in giving me the time I need to write. I have no set daily
goals--it just depends on how things are going. Some days I'll write two
pages, some days ten or fifteen. Some days they're good pages, some days
they're not. But I eventually get the
book done!
SS: We hear a lot about setting goals and making career plans and how
important they are. You said you aren’t much for daily goals, but how
about long term and career planning?
JS: Definitely long term. I never allowed myself to doubt, even for a
moment, that I would eventually sell. I visualized that constantly, and
that broad goal forced me to do the smaller things I had to do to get
there. Never, though, did I imagine I'd sell five books in eight months!
SS: Do you have any career planning tips for unpublished writers? For
published writers?
JS: As an unpublished writer, you can't control whether an editor
decides to buy your book, but you can control what you put in front of
that editor, making it so wonderful that she can't possibly say no. Then
after that first sale, you'll see what options you have and can start
planning for a long-term career. As far as career planning tips for
published writers, I'm not in a position yet to
offer them advice. I'm too busy taking their advice!
SS: Do you have an agent? If so, how important do you feel an agent is
to an author's career? JS: Linda Kruger offered
to represent me during the time I was doing rewrites on STRAY HEARTS for
Brenda Chin at Harlequin and hoping for a sale. I could have made that
first sale without an agent, but in my opinion, if you're going to be a
professional writer with a long-term career, an agent is
an absolute necessity. Linda handles all the details I don't want to
deal with, and her advice has been invaluable.
SS: What are some of the things you've learned/experienced in the
business that prior to selling you had "no idea?"
JS: Truthfully, there haven't been many surprises, but that's because I
sought out the advice of the wonderful published authors at my RWA
chapter in Dallas even before I sold, so I already had a pretty clear
picture of what I was going to face afterward. That's something I'd
recommend highly--seek out the advice of the people who are where you
want to be, then follow that advice!
SS: Any last thoughts?
JS: I get very irritated when I hear doom and gloom about how impossible
it is to get that first sale. Read the RWR. There are first sales
every single month. If you write a great book that meets an editor's
needs, she'll buy it!
SS: Thanks for the interview, Jane. It’s been great.
Be sure and look for a copy of STRAY HEARTS, and watch for THE
MATCHMAKER'S MISTAKE coming in March 2001 from Harlequin Duets.
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